05/23/12
cafeteria Rendering

Comments

This is your best drawing of the idea, but I need some dimensions of the overall space and maybe a park with a seedum green roof could also be included in the design. The plan is fine but a bit too repetitive. Incorporate more elements such as vegetable garden, green roof, and maybe a bit more shelter or shading elements up top.

You've done a great job in recognizing your current cafeteria's problems, including crowded lines and poor removal of waste. You provide a creative solution in utilizing the roof for outdoor seating and recreation. I like your drawing that shows two different levels, but how do these levels relate to other parts of the school? What surrounds the lower level courtyard? Is it the existing cafeteria or a new space? If it's a new space, remember to consider food preparation, storage, serving, and waste removal. More images and detailed texts would help explain your solutions more clearly. An excellent start!